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- --------------------Writing for a Skeptical Buyer---------------------
-
- The previous section detailed how the market can be segmented by
- purchasing information requirements. This study told us that only 50%
- of the whole market is within shareware's reach. Furthermore, the kind
- of information available on shareware today limits it to 12% of its
- potential or 6% of the whole. Some will argue that shareware does reach
- the whole market by first addressing the available 12% and then
- spreading from there by other means. Of course, this is what we hope
- for but it's not that easy. First, remember the rule about market
- segments defined earlier; you can not reach the next market by the same
- means used to reach the preceding one. Other market segments need an
- increasing degree of assurance to make a buying decision. Success with
- the Earlier Adopter markets won't help sell the majority unless the
- majority is referencing the previous buyers. Hence Geoffrey MooreÆs
- chasm where failure follows success. The issue of one market
- referencing another for buying advice is a subject in itself best
- covered in the book, "Crossing The Chasm".
-
- So there's a problem. What can be done ? First letÆs talk about what's
- not working. No matter where you look there is very little information
- period about shareware. Whether itÆs on-line catalogs, printed catalogs
- with pictures or CD-ROM discs. Since there is no place to get good
- information the majority of the market dismisses shareware all together.
- Why would the skeptical portion of the market labor to uncover a
- product's unknown value. We must do this work for them. The MX
- shareware database provides the means.
-
-
- ---------------------What is needed, what works------------------------
-
- Any one of us could list fundamental rules such as ôbe clearö or ôkeep
- your audience in mindö. But how do we know if this has been
- accomplished ? We donÆt. We canÆt. We are not the ones to judge our
- own efforts. There is no substitute for having members of our target
- audience evaluate the success of our efforts.
-
- I am going to side step the classic exhortation to differentiate. You
- know, state whatÆs different about your software. Most shareware has
- difficulty with this which may explain why it struggles so.
-
- With all that said, here are the key points;
-
- 1) A critical issue is completeness. If the buyer is left with a single
- question unanswered, they will look elsewhere before coming back, should
- you be so lucky. One of the major concerns about small time software is
- whether or not it addresses all needs for its purpose. A buyer will
- sooner opt for the commercial industry leader and assume it will get
- better rather than risk investing themselves in a better product thatÆs
- not the leader. Therefore you must assure them the intended purpose is
- completely covered. You must demonstrate this, not just say it. A
- common statement in shareware descriptions is, ".....and much, much
- more.". Oh boy, you just planted the question, like what more ? Of
- course, saying everything would bog down the reader so place your main
- pitch at the top as a hook. The reader can then page down through
- feature descriptions. You could also use a feature point list with a
- reference to a second file containing more information.
-
- The buyer does not want to be dependent on future upgrades from and
- unknown. If upgrades are a natural part of your product type then be
- prepared to prove you HAVE BEEN delivering them. Since the MX database
- will attach any number of files to the same product, split off a list of
- updates into another file and note its existence in the primary product
- description.
-
- 2) Name the group of people most likely to need your product unless it's
- entertainment software. How many times have you said, "That's
- interesting but when do I really need it ?". Everybody COULD use
- everything sometime. The temptation is to broaden the market by saying
- something to the effect of, "Everybody needs it!". This does not work.
- Instead, specifically name the group that most needs your software and
- let the reader decide if they're in that group or close enough to it. I
- can't stress this enough. Even if the reader does not need it
- themselves, if they understand who does, they will reference it to
- someone else.
-
- Be very specific in identifying the pressing need as in, "Such and such
- a person, doing this type of activity, with X number of __ would be very
- happy with this program.". Go ahead and identify the broader market but
- not at the expense of giving the reader specifics they can compare
- themselves to. Basically I'm saying, give the buyer a means to testing
- the DEGREE of their need. Identifying who does not need your program
- lends credibility to your statement about who does. Think about it.
-
- 3) References. This is the single most important element. Everything
- you say will be taken with a grain of salt unless you can back it up.
- References are your number one credibility builder. Each market segment
- is defined by how much referencing is required. If you have no
- referencing then your market is very small. At one end of the spectrum
- are references that say, "This product does what it says." and at the
- other end they say, "I know your work and you want this.". The majority
- of the market will not buy without some reference. Any reference is
- better than none. At the very least it tells people someone on this
- planet has at least looked at the product. This is ten times more
- critical for major applications since the buyer can not hope to fully
- evaluate it themselves. They will need assurances before getting knee
- deep in your software.
-
- Very few shareware products have published reviews. This isn't
- surprising since reviewers like to cover the same products everyone else
- is. As an alternative, consider having a well known author review your
- work. This actually counts for quite a bit although you will need 6-10
- of these if they are not detailed.
-
- Identifying the number of existing users also counts as a reference
- along with users' letters. Anything that says other people are using
- your work is a step in the right direction. Leaving this out makes you
- appear to be nobody going nowhere. Keep in mind, the majority of the
- market CAN NOT buy without a reference. The better the references the
- larger the market.
-
-
- 4) Pitch value. Otherwise known as hamming it up. Truthfully I haven't
- made up my mind about this. Going too far makes you look like a clown.
- Leaving it out completely looks like you are not trying. Face it, in
- the USA we expect some embroiderment. It won't take the place on any
- other element but it communicates a desire to sell. The buyer likes
- knowing you want his business. Write in a fashion buyers are accustom
- to. Someone who needs your software may not be overly familiar with
- your field. Help them understand the basics. This could be done with
- MXDB by attaching a second file containing background information. Then
- reference it in the main presentation for those that want to know more.
- It makes you look knowledgeable and helpful.
-
-
- To sum up;
-
- 1. Test your presentation with your target market. If questions exist,
- go back and answer them.
-
- 2. Hook the reader with a short paragraph. Follow up with details. Be
- complete. Use more than one file if necessary.
-
- 3. Give the buyer some means to evaluate their need. Identify the
- group that most needs your software.
-
- 4. Provide references. Anything that assures people that someone else
- on the planet has seen your work.
-
- 5. Pitch a little. The average buyer expects it. Do not do so without
- first doing everything else.
-
- If you are not doing these things ask yourself what you hope to
- accomplish. If the answer is nothing in particular then nothing in
- particular will happen. If you want sales then step into the shoes of
- the skeptic buyer who is not looking to see why he should buy your
- product but rather why he should NOT buy.
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